Thursday, July 12, 2012

Excerpt "Freddy's French Fries Fiasco"



His name was Tommy, and he was always on the lookout to

catch birds. Tommy’s fur was matted, and he had old battle

scars on his nose. His bright green eyes always glared.

Tommy looked scary!






He knew Freddy and

his friends liked to fly

around the yard, and

Tommy would get excited

because he wanted to

catch them. Freddy’s

parents had warned him

about the dangers of

being in that backyard.

As it gradually turned

dark, cars continued

to drive along the road.




Freddy noticed their pretty white and red

lights. Sometimes lots of lights appeared, and

other times there were not that many.



All day long, humans had come and gone. They had arrived

at the restaurant in shiny cars and jumped out. Laughing

and talking, they had run into the building. After a while,

they had come out with arms full of colorful bags filled with

food—very yummy food! Freddy had tried the food and found

it very tasty! He smacked his yellow beak as he thought of the

delicious food.


During the past few weeks, Freddy had met and interacted

with a few little humans—children. He especially liked the

children. They had given him lots of little yellow sticks—french

fries, the children called them. The children had arrived with

their mothers and fathers and sat outside to eat their food—

the yummy french fries!




 











Today was a very lazy day for Freddy. He had just met a few

humans, and they had fed him a lot of french fries. Oh, they

are so yummy! thought Freddy as he fluttered his wings and

smacked his little yellow beak.

A few minutes later, Freddy was lazily dozing off. Hmm, this

is so nice and quiet. His little black head nodded and he was

soon fast asleep in the warm, bright sunlight.



“Hey, Freddy! Hey!” called out a small brown bird. “Hey,

come out and play with us!”



“Huh?” Freddy woke up with a start. “What… huh…what?”

“Freddy, over here. It’s me, Alfie!” yelled the little brown bird

waving his wings.


Alfie was excited and could not sit still. He hopped on his

left leg, then his right leg, then on the left, and then on the

right one again. His two little friends, Jeanie and Robby, were

waiting for him in the nearest treetop where they lived with

their parents.


“Jeanie, Robby, and I are going to play. We’re all going to

play together! We’re going to fly over the lake!” squawked Alfie

to no one in particular. “I’m so excited. We’re going to catch

some insects and spy on Tommy the tomcat. We’re even going

to fly without flapping our wings. That is so dangerous! C’mon,

Freddy, c’mon. It’ll be so much fun!”


Freddy slowly stretched out his wings and yawned. “Nah, I

don’t feel like it. I’m tired. I want to take a nap.”

Alfie shrugged his little shoulders, turned around, and

yelled, “Robby! Jeanie! Let’s go. Let’s have some fun!”








Tommy, the Terrifying Tomcat




Alfie’s two little friends took flight from the green treetop.

The breeze stirred the dark green leaves causing a soft rustling

sound. Side by side, the three little friends headed to the lake.

A few ducks and swans glided through the water enjoying the

warmth and quiet of an idle summer’s day.



“Whoo-hoo!” yelled Jeanie as she swooped down to catch

minnows.


“Hey, Jeanie, look at me! I’m floating through the air. I’m

not flapping my wings!” shouted Robby.



Giggling, Jeanie swooped down to catch up with him.

“Oh, Robby, you are such a show-off!” squealed Jeanie as

she flapped her wings




 “Hey, guys,” called Alfie. “Look. Tommy, the tomcat is

sleeping! Let’s go drink from his water bowl. It’ll be a really

exciting game!”


“Alfie, you know that’s dangerous!” gasped Jeanie.

“That sounds like so much fun!” chuckled Robby.

“Oh Jeanie, it’ll be fun! Let’s go!” twittered Alfie.



Off the three friends went. Squawking and squealing while

pretending to be dive-bombers, they headed directly towards

the overgrown backyard where Tommy was lounging in a

patch of sunlight.



Hiding in the thorn bushes, the three friends waited. The

breeze rustled the leaves, and the little sparrows swayed

on a branch, waiting for just the right

moment. They were so excited, they

could hardly stay quiet.


This was a very  dangerous adventure and

their eyes  shone brightly with anticipation.


Tommy stretched and rolled onto his

back. His front paws were spread out

above his head. His head was rolled to

one side and he had a peaceful grin on

his ragged face. Once in a while he licked

his lips, and the little sparrows could

see that there were only a few teeth left

in his mouth.


One by one, the little friends flew to the cracked ceramic

bowl that stood next to an old, rusty garbage can. Alfie stood

on the edge of the bowl and took a sip of water. Jeanie gasped.

Alfie was so brave!


Next, Jeanie quietly swooped down and landed on the

garbage can. She hopped to the edge and jumped toward the

water bowl. She was just about to take a sip when Robby

loudly crash-landed on top of the garbage can. The sound

echoed through the quiet afternoon and woke up Tommy.



In one smooth move, Tommy jumped up and looked around.

In an instant he saw the little sparrows and pounced towards

them. His claws were facing the birds, and they glistened in

the sunlight. They looked very big and sharp.



His bright greeneyes were mesmerizing as he glared at the little birds.

Alfie jumped up, flapped his wings, and off he went into

the bushes. Jeanie quickly fluttered over to the nearest tree.

But poor Robby looked around, dazed after his topsy-turvy

landing.



Tommy saw Robby and quietly crouched down, getting

ready to pounce. Just then, Alfie and Jeanie fluttered around

Tommy. They needed to give Robby time to escape.



Tommy jumped up on his hind legs and swatted at them

with his long front paws.



Robby got up and flew to safety, as Jeanie and Alfie followed

close behind. Tommy didn’t give up, though. He continued

jumping and swatting while following them. Tommy began

hissing and meowing, which made him look quite scary.



The birds finally reached the fence and landed on the other

side. Their feathers were ruffled, and their little hearts were

pounding inside their chests.



They were panting so hard that their tiny chests were heaving, and t

hey couldn’t catch their breath.

Their yellow beaks opened widely to get more air.



With a panicked look on each of their tiny faces, the three friends

huddled together.



Tommy’s face was pushed against the fence.

“Next time I will get you!” hissed Tommy. “How dare you

drink my water! That’s my water. Get your own!” Tommy then

turned around, walked away, and went to lie down at his

favorite spot in the sun.





“Phew! That was close,” panted Alfie.

“He was so mean!” chirped Jeanie.

“Let’s do it again!” chimed Robby.

Alfie had lost interest. “Nah, I think we should go see  Freddy.”



Chapter 3

The Delicious French Fries



Freddy had just woken up from his nap. After stretching,

yawning, and looking about, he saw his three friends being

chased by Tommy, the tomcat who lived in the garden.

“Oh no!” called out Freddy as he anxiously watched Tommy

chasing his friends.





When his friends finally reached the other side of the fence, Freddy relaxed.



I’m hungry again, and thirsty, too, thought Freddy. With a

sigh, he struggled out of his nest made of Styrofoam, twigs,

and paper. He waddled through the gravel and tar to the edge

of the roof. Freddy then carefully peered over the edge to see

if any of the children had left those wonderful yellow sticks—

french fries. He also loved that yummy brown water they

called pop.


While Freddy was peaking over the edge of the roof, he did

not notice that his three friends were sneaking up behind

him. Step by step, they quietly crept closer and closer until

suddenly…



“Boo!” they yelled out in chorus.

With a yelp, Freddy jumped and nearly fell off the roof. He

flapped his wings vigorously, so he would not topple to the

ground below.


He turned to his friends. With a frown on his face, he yelled,

“Hey, that’s not nice!”

Alfie chuckled. He admitted he had been wrong to frighten

Freddy. “Well, okay. What were you doing, anyway?”



 “I was looking to see

if the children were

down there eating some

food,” said Freddy.



“What kind of

food?” Jeanie asked

curiously.





“Real yummy food,”

replied Freddy.

“Is it dangerous to

get that food?” asked

Robby.




“No, not at all. The

humans really like us.

They give us food, and

they laugh and say we’re cute.”





“Really?” chirped Alfie. “This sounds interesting.”

“Let’s go check out those humans,” squealed Jeanie.





Freddy pointed out some brightly dressed boys and girls

who sat at the tables laughing and talking while sipping on

delicious pop and munching on long, crispy french fries.





“Oh, look. I see some children now,” said Freddy.

Robby was growing impatient. “Well, let’s go!” he called.

“Oh, what is that red stuff?” cried Jeanie. “That looks awful.”

She puffed out her feathers to show her disgust.

Freddy laughed. “Ha, ha.. “That’s really tasty! The children

call it ketchup.”



Jeanie giggled. “Ketchup, that’s a funny word.”

Robby had already flown over to the tables, boldly landing

right in the middle of the table where the children were eating.

One of the boys, dressed in blue shorts and a T-shirt, pushed

back a shock of dark brown hair. With his brown eyes wide

with curiosity and interest, the young boy leaned forward to

look at Robby.. Robby ruffled his feathers and bravely stared

back. He tried to look like a big, mean bird!




Robby was a bit scared but tried to be courageous. Far

away, from the rooftop, the children looked small, but this

close, they were really big!







Slowly, the boy picked up a French fry and held it up to

Robby. The French fry shimmered in the bright sunlight as a

drop of fat dripped to the table. Timidly, Robby leaned forward

and stretched his neck to reach the French fry. Cautiously he

took a nibble and swiftly flew off, to the safety of the rooftop.

“Wow, this is good!” yelled Robby as he smacked his small

beak. “This is sooooo yummy!”

Knowingly, Freddy nodded. “Yup, I know. They are very

good, huh?”


“I want more! More!” squealed Robby as he flew away.

Robby was so excited about the french fries that he did

not watch where he was flying. He swooped down towards

the table and started to land. Poor Robby did not see he was

going too fast, and he landed on the table with a big thump.

His little wings spread out like an eagle.


He skidded across the greasy tabletop and ended up

headfirst in a blob of ketchup. His head was covered with

ketchup. Shocked, he tried to shake off the red sauce, but it

was too sticky. One at a time, he opened his eyes and peered

through the ketchup to see where the other french fries were.





The children had stopped talking and were staring at the

little bird covered with ketchup. A little girl with bright red

curls, blue eyes, and freckles burst out laughing.

She pointed at Robby. “Look, look! What a funny bird!”

Poor Robby! He just wanted another French fry. He shook

himself, and without looking at the children, he walked over

to a paper plate where the french fries were spread out. Robby

picked one up in his beak and quickly flew away to enjoy his

meal.


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